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**__Creative Writing/haunted house__**
The houses in town are small and… normal. That house in the countryside was big and creepy. There where a lot of clouds above that ugly haunted house. The moonlight was illuminating the house. The bats were flying around the house and the fog was getting thicker. The smell was bitter and I heard a lovely music box. I saw a dark silhouette pass by an illuminated room. I heard a babies cry. I saw a lightning go into the house. The light went off. There were many trees without leaves. The howling of wolves was getting closer and closer. An organ began to play, the baby didn’t stop crying. All became silent. The light went off. A dark and small silhouette passed through the moonlight. There was nothing but loneliness. The baby stopped crying. I decided to enter that creepy house.

I smelled rotted wood and old. I smelled blood. There was a beautiful and red apple. I couldn’t resist and I took a bite. The taste of that apple was bitter and nasty. I thought I was going to die because a chill came all the way from by foot to my head. I tasted fear. There was dust and dirt. The sweat was coming down my cheeks, they reached my tongue. It tasted like some salty water.

The smell of the living room was bad and disgusting. A horrible smell passed by. I went upstairs and I saw a big room, I entered. I smelled death, like a pyramid. I thought I was going to die because the smell was horrible. There were skeletons and many dead people. They smelled like rotten food.

I heard shouts, like people dying. //Boom!// Something had fallen down. I was very scared. A thunder was about to come. //Criiiiiiii!// I knew someone was entering the house. It was coming upstairs. I heard a creepy noise. I had to escape. The man’s footsteps were killing me.

I went to the other room. I saw a baby. He was bleeding. The music box began to make a beautiful sound. I saw the baby. He wasn’t moving. He was dead. Someone was coming. I saw the shape of man. He didn’t enter the room. I saw the open window and decided to go out.

Diana Montalvo 7th Grade

__**Character Comparison**__
I read two book from the same author, Jacqueline Wilson. This books are The Suitcase Kid and The Mum-Minder. I have made a comparison from the two books about the similarities and differences. I have added thoughts and some facts about Jacqueline Wilson. Andy is from the book The Suitcase Kid and Sadie is from the book The mum-Minder.

Andy's parents are divorced, live in different houses and both have married again although Sadie's parents live in the same house and are just married once. The author Jacqueline Wilson have divorce and has one daughter, so in this books she may write her experiences.

Andy likes to go to play to the street with her friend Radish that is a rabbit and she doesnt pass much time with her parents as well as Sadie. Sadie goes to work with the mothers of the babies that Sadie's mum take care of. I think that the two books are very different but as well very similar because both books are told by a girl but not the same girl or same feelings about their family.

Andy, because her parents are divorced she has to keep going from her mum's house to her dad's house because when she was at mum she missed dad, and when she was with dad she missed mum. However, Sadie lived in the same house with both parents together and she has a little sister called Sara. The famous author, Jacqueline Wilson got inspiration by her adorable daughter.

Andy is very independient because she goes alone to the street even at night time and she missed school because she was playing with Radish. Sadie goes to places or to work without her mother or father. I think that you dont have to go alone to places because you can get lost or you can get hurt by other people.

Sadie's mum pass a lot of time with Sadie because she work as a mum-minder and that work is at home. The parents of the babies go to live their babies so that Sadie's mum took care of them. Whereas, Andy's mum went to work all day and she doesnt pass much time with her daughter. The worldwide known, Jacqueline Wilson have write her autobiographies that are very interesting to read because you get to know more about her life, like facts, her divorce and much more.

Andy loved her step brothers and her step sisters although she doesnt want to demostrated because she is a girl to is hard to win. Sadie really loves her sister and the other babies that her mother take care of. In the book The Suitcase Kid, I really got to know what does it feel to have divorced parents because my parents are not divorced.

To conclude I think you should read this two books because they are very interesting to read and to enjoy the time. Jacqueline Wilson have write a lot of books that are enjoing to read. She has won a lot of awards because her books. I recommend this book to children from 10 to 12 years old.

Diana Montalvo 5th Grade